tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1189678078939464818.post4781290981629885542..comments2023-07-12T05:23:17.665-07:00Comments on Deborah Holt Williams' Blog: Waiting and WonderingDeborah Holt Williamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00650865438163867369noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1189678078939464818.post-86634863857028035592013-03-20T19:38:00.938-07:002013-03-20T19:38:00.938-07:00That's great feedback, Tami! My fingers are c...That's great feedback, Tami! My fingers are crossed for you, too! My Feb. review wasn't as encouraging for my cowboy story, so I sent hired Rob Sanders, author of Cowboy Christmas, to critique it for me, and I think it is a much better story now. He's now looking over my revised manuscript, and hopefully I'll have it ready to send out soon.Deborah Holt Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650865438163867369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1189678078939464818.post-54688551154467535922013-03-20T19:06:56.294-07:002013-03-20T19:06:56.294-07:00I'll be happy to comment. I submitted to our F...I'll be happy to comment. I submitted to our February agent and while it wasn't a yes, he did state that there was a need in the market for my particular topic. He thought the writing was poised and polished. He thought it read more like a short story, because my PB had a lot of dialogue. I had a good experience from this. I went back, revised, submitted it to another publisher who liked it and asked me to resubmit with it in bilingual form and to fix one part. Fingers are crossed. But I am thankful for 12 x 12 feedback I received because it forced me to make the manuscript event better.TamiWritesStuffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14126989596819297081noreply@blogger.com