One
Lonely Halloween (100 words)
By
Deborah Holt Williams
A lonely
black cat wandered through the spooky woods.
A small voice said, “Ouch! You’re stepping on me!” “I’m sorry!” said the cat. “Is anything broken?” “One leg,” said the spider. “Help me!”
The cat lowered her tail. “Climb aboard,” she said. They rested at a
house where a pumpkin glowed on the porch.
Then they heard a cackle.
“I was
lonely tonight,” said a friendly witch.
“But now I have visitors. Come
in!” She put a tiny piece of black tape
around the spider’s broken leg. Three
new friends told stories by a cozy fire. Halloween wasn’t lonely anymore.
Aw, I love a happy ending. A fun and sweet story. Great job, Deborah!
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece, Deb! I want to write like you when I grow up. ;0)
ReplyDeleteAww, I love the tiny piece of black tape on the spider's broken leg!
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying the friendship stories! Very sweet.
ReplyDeleteAw! What a cute cozy Halloween story! So sweet, Deborah! I'm glad the three friends spent a happy and not lonely Halloween together :) Thanks so much for joining in the fun!
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful story! Love it, love it! :-)
ReplyDeleteA happy-ever-after (and an improvised band-aid for a spider)--perfect! :-)
ReplyDeleteA witch and a black cat become friends in my story too! Great minds think alike! I didn't have a spider though. Nice touch.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, Deb! A beautiful message of friendship for Halloween...perfect!
ReplyDeleteSweet story! I'm glad the spider got his leg tended to :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone, for your kind comments. And I wish you all a very Happy Halloween!
ReplyDeleteA band aid for a spider! what a cute idea!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad they all became friends. I agree, no one should be alone (or without candy :)) on Halloween!
ReplyDeleteI love that the start is a spider!
ReplyDeleteAAWW! not a lonely Halloween? so glad. Lol.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely that all the traditionally scary things found comfort in each other.
ReplyDeleteLove this sweet story. Great job!
ReplyDeleteA compassionate cat! Sweet!
ReplyDeleteAh bless...very cute :)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful, feel-good Halloween story-- how refreshing!
ReplyDeleteAww--I love friendship stories.
ReplyDeleteWith all the scary Halloween stories and images out there in the world, it's nice to read one that's sweet. I enjoyed this!
ReplyDelete-Carrie
Awwww. . .this is sweet, Deborah! Very peaceful and satisfying. Good job!
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